It's been a long time since I checked out your game. I remember liking it but being concerned because of the lack of tags. I've seen too many good harem stories ruined because of unavoidable lesbian turning the harem into a polyamory.
Can you please tell me what your planned fetishes are and if they will be optional (as in the player decides whether they happen or not), especially Lesbian?
So, I don't intend to put polyamory in the VN, the girls only love the MC, they participated in sex together and I intend to let you choose if you want them to do something together when the MC is present and that's it. As far as fetishes are concerned, I'm not going to include many, but what will definitely be there is pregnancy, anal, voyeur and group sex (FFM, FFFM...). Never NTR. If I add another fetish, I'll probably ask you all for your opinion.
Hey Eschvna, how are you? I hope well! So, I want to create the discord by January at the latest, this month it's really hard for me to do anything else, I'm doing the update in my spare time in the early hours so it's pretty busy for now. I'll try to release the next update by the end of December now so it doesn't take too long.
its not a bad game especially considering youre new to all this so props for the attempt. If i were you however id suggest looking into hiring a proofreader to fix the english if possible, you can check on sites like fiverr for people who can help. this project has potential, and im interested in seeing how it progresses. lets see what happens in the next update, good luck!
The characters aren't very interesting (except for Drica) and the plot isn't original. The art is pretty good, except when Marta looks like she is eating the baby.
The story just isn't engaging enough, why should I care about this world or these characters?
Also, will renpy let you use text-shadow? It gives much better readability against patterned backgrounds.
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awww, can't download cause my firewall hates the side u want us to download from :/
Really? Which site do you usually download your games from? For PC or MAC?
only pc and itch io, mega mostly, and yes firewall says that this side was reported as unsafe.
Weird. Try these links:
Chapter 1:
https://mega.nz/file/VukDEJ7Y#1p5to9LHQEjvptDS3X7tXRLKGW2QLU14LpXkHiPBr1c
Chapter 2:
https://mega.nz/file/0z10FSyI#JzFlbmmvhnKuGtwCCv3i-XrYeHKMUFCaRvaX3gdAJXQ
Let me know if it works and thank you for your interest in my VN.
Big hugs.
forgot to reply, thank you it worked with mega
It's been a long time since I checked out your game. I remember liking it but being concerned because of the lack of tags. I've seen too many good harem stories ruined because of unavoidable lesbian turning the harem into a polyamory.
Can you please tell me what your planned fetishes are and if they will be optional (as in the player decides whether they happen or not), especially Lesbian?
Hey battali0n.
So, I don't intend to put polyamory in the VN, the girls only love the MC, they participated in sex together and I intend to let you choose if you want them to do something together when the MC is present and that's it. As far as fetishes are concerned, I'm not going to include many, but what will definitely be there is pregnancy, anal, voyeur and group sex (FFM, FFFM...). Never NTR. If I add another fetish, I'll probably ask you all for your opinion.
I hope I've answered your questions, big hug!
I really recomend to be made an Discord Channel for people interact with u and help u when possible.
Hey Eschvna, how are you? I hope well!
So, I want to create the discord by January at the latest, this month it's really hard for me to do anything else, I'm doing the update in my spare time in the early hours so it's pretty busy for now. I'll try to release the next update by the end of December now so it doesn't take too long.
Thanks for your support!
Big hugs.
Its good.
Thank you very much!
its not a bad game especially considering youre new to all this so props for the attempt. If i were you however id suggest looking into hiring a proofreader to fix the english if possible, you can check on sites like fiverr for people who can help. this project has potential, and im interested in seeing how it progresses. lets see what happens in the next update, good luck!
Thank you very much, I am working hard to improve in every possible aspect, especially regarding English, I appreciate the feedback.
I like the characters and story as well as hope there will be more soon. I'm sure it'll be a great and fun game
Thank you so much, I have a lot of cool things planned, I hope you like it, hug.
I most likely will. From what I've seen so far it'll be a good game. I look forward too more content, hug back.
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The characters aren't very interesting (except for Drica) and the plot isn't original. The art is pretty good, except when Marta looks like she is eating the baby.
The story just isn't engaging enough, why should I care about this world or these characters?
Also, will renpy let you use text-shadow? It gives much better readability against patterned backgrounds.
Thanks for your feedback, I will take them all into consideration.